Sonja, It's easy to see how much you love the Lord in glancing over your notes, lyrics and listening to this song, "Holy Spirit Wind." I like the imagery and metaphor in your line, "I'm leaning into the Holy Spirit Wind." I think it's a good hook. I also like your melody line in the next to last line of the chorus under the hook. The song has a memorable "hook," good sectional contrast, it is cohesive, good use of imagery. It communicates emotion to the listener and the vocal does help to sell the song." For the current CCM martket, the lyric could be a bit less formal sounding and be more relaxed and conversational, and include more imagery and details.
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